Feb 12, 2012
It’s that time of the week again! I’m enjoying sharing Phyxe so much I thought I’d offer up another #sixsentence Sunday.
If you’ve been reading, Phyxe has been slashed by poison tipped Demon claws. She’s being tended by two Matrons in the Haven.
Phyxe hovered between awareness and tracking the trails the sounds waves made across the backs of her eyelids. Pretty colors. She focused as well as she could. Bitch One. She’d name the pissy one, Bitch One. It suited the sound of her voice.
Stay tuned, or even better, buy the book! I’m working away on Gaian’s story. The Goddess of Earth is extremely irritated with her current situation, and the tiger is starting to get little edgy.
Bitch one. HA! Great six!
Yeah, Phyxe is a little mouthy and temperamental
I get a great sense of her state of mind, as the poison travels through her body. Nice Six!
Well, when you’re the Fire Goddess unable to use your powers in a strange planet, everyone’s your enemy.
I like the simplicity of her thoughts — lotsa characterization in these little bursts of awareness.
Wonderful, sassy snippet!
Yeah for the pretty colors
and bitch one
giggle, nice 6
Oh yeah. Bitch one. Gotta love it. And as mentioned above, I like the sparsity of her thoughts. Great way to show character.
Hehehehe…bitch one. I love it. Great six.
Love the humour!
lol, I like Phyxe already!
Love the pretty colors during the mental tracking. Very intriguing six!
Great characterization!
Sounds like a good name to me! great snippet!
Really liked this!
I get the feeling she doesn’t care for her nurses. And thanks for stopping by mine–I had to unspam you.