Comments for Sybir http://www.sybir.com urban fantasy & paranormal romance author Tue, 21 Feb 2012 06:51:56 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 Comment on Six Sentence Sunday: Breaking Things by Gayle Ramage http://www.sybir.com/six-sentence-sunday-three/#comment-440 Gayle Ramage Tue, 21 Feb 2012 06:51:56 +0000 http://www.sybir.com/?p=969#comment-440 lol, love the snippet! lol, love the snippet!

]]> Comment on Six Sentence Sunday: Breaking Things by S. J. Maylee http://www.sybir.com/six-sentence-sunday-three/#comment-437 S. J. Maylee Sun, 19 Feb 2012 23:24:38 +0000 http://www.sybir.com/?p=969#comment-437 w/o a 2nd thought she entered the melee, yeap she's pissed please tell us what happens next!! w/o a 2nd thought she entered the melee, yeap she’s pissed
please tell us what happens next!!

]]> Comment on Six Sentence Sunday: Breaking Things by Nick Kelly http://www.sybir.com/six-sentence-sunday-three/#comment-436 Nick Kelly Sun, 19 Feb 2012 23:14:21 +0000 http://www.sybir.com/?p=969#comment-436 Not a good kind of kitty to tick off, for sure. Good SSS! Not a good kind of kitty to tick off, for sure. Good SSS!

]]> Comment on Six Sentence Sunday: Breaking Things by Alix http://www.sybir.com/six-sentence-sunday-three/#comment-435 Alix Sun, 19 Feb 2012 21:12:07 +0000 http://www.sybir.com/?p=969#comment-435 Great pacing. Great pacing.

]]> Comment on Six Sentence Sunday: Breaking Things by Cate Masters http://www.sybir.com/six-sentence-sunday-three/#comment-434 Cate Masters Sun, 19 Feb 2012 20:57:32 +0000 http://www.sybir.com/?p=969#comment-434 Love the name Sabre. Seems to fit her perfectly. :) Love the name Sabre. Seems to fit her perfectly. :)

]]> Comment on Six Sentence Sunday: Breaking Things by Jessica Knauss http://www.sybir.com/six-sentence-sunday-three/#comment-433 Jessica Knauss Sun, 19 Feb 2012 20:38:16 +0000 http://www.sybir.com/?p=969#comment-433 Nice setup. I'd be mad, too! Nice setup. I’d be mad, too!

]]> Comment on Six Sentence Sunday: Breaking Things by Sue Ann Bowling http://www.sybir.com/six-sentence-sunday-three/#comment-432 Sue Ann Bowling Sun, 19 Feb 2012 20:09:19 +0000 http://www.sybir.com/?p=969#comment-432 The third sentence should either be repunctuated to make it a subordinate clause or the verb changed to "was radiating" or "radiated." Love the way her irritation spills over when she reaches the club. The third sentence should either be repunctuated to make it a subordinate clause or the verb changed to “was radiating” or “radiated.” Love the way her irritation spills over when she reaches the club.

]]> Comment on Six Sentence Sunday: Breaking Things by D'Ann Linscott-Dunham http://www.sybir.com/six-sentence-sunday-three/#comment-430 D'Ann Linscott-Dunham Sun, 19 Feb 2012 16:12:46 +0000 http://www.sybir.com/?p=969#comment-430 Breaking her furniture? Wow, would I be mad! Breaking her furniture? Wow, would I be mad!

]]> Comment on Six Sentence Sunday: Breaking Things by D'Ann Linscott-Dunham http://www.sybir.com/six-sentence-sunday-three/#comment-429 D'Ann Linscott-Dunham Sun, 19 Feb 2012 16:12:46 +0000 http://www.sybir.com/?p=969#comment-429 Breaking her furniture? Wow, would I be mad! Breaking her furniture? Wow, would I be mad!

]]> Comment on Six Sentence Sunday: Breaking Things by Wendy S. Russo http://www.sybir.com/six-sentence-sunday-three/#comment-428 Wendy S. Russo Sun, 19 Feb 2012 15:02:33 +0000 http://www.sybir.com/?p=969#comment-428 I Love Scriviener! And I love the scene. :) I Love Scriviener! And I love the scene. :)

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